Welcome to my A2 Media blog. On here you will find my music video, CD packaging and Tour poster. As well as the planning stages that happened prior to production and evaluation.
• Hi Connor, some really good analysis and responses from your evidence gathering covered here in evaluation 3.
• The voice over works well and gives the viewer an option to listen rather than read through. Good to see you give a full overview of questions.
• The use of the word 'voyeurism' is out of context in relation to your video and needs to be replaced. Words such as watchers: onlooker, spectator, observer, viewer, fly on the wall; witness, bystander, looker-on; spy may be more appropriate.
• I would like you to go over a few areas again so you can reflect a little as the media language in areas needs to be extended upon. Question 4 - responses 'done' is not grammatically correct please change and change this part of voice over too.
• Question 5 text over runs so reduce text size please.Again change use of voyeurism in this context. • A very thorough prezi here Connor with lots of interesting and excellent insights into your poster, video and CD packaging from your survey responses.
• I can see this has taken a long time to create and prepare and with a few tweaks it is up to a full level 4, currently dipping in and out of level 3 and 4.
• Please make changes suggested and see me in class.
• Hi Connor, some really good analysis and responses from your evidence gathering covered here in evaluation 3.
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• The use of the word 'voyeurism' is out of context in relation to your video and needs to be replaced. Words such as watchers: onlooker, spectator, observer, viewer, fly on the wall; witness, bystander, looker-on; spy may be more appropriate.
• I would like you to go over a few areas again so you can reflect a little as the media language in areas needs to be extended upon. Question 4 - responses 'done' is not grammatically correct please change and change this part of voice over too.
• Question 5 text over runs so reduce text size please.Again change use of voyeurism in this context.
• A very thorough prezi here Connor with lots of interesting and excellent insights into your poster, video and CD packaging from your survey responses.
• I can see this has taken a long time to create and prepare and with a few tweaks it is up to a full level 4, currently dipping in and out of level 3 and 4.
• Please make changes suggested and see me in class.
Mrs McD-H
Thanks for the feedback, I will make the appropriate changes ASAP and will let you know when it is finished.
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